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I wanted to learn programmin languages to improve my work last week.

But now, I want to travel abroad.

I surfed the Internet to find a fancy trip and I found Leaf’s posting about looking for a guy or girl who can join their trip in Bali between Sep. 18th to 22th.

I was interested in that, so I added her msn to my list.

After I chatted with Leaf this morning, I decided to join this traveling.

I got a lot of information about Bali from Leaf.

She wanted me to connect Candy who works in a travel agency.

I have paid the deposit to take a flight.

I am preparing the emotion of the traveling.

 


PART I

I wanted to learn a computer programming language to improve my cable design last week.

But, now I want to have a foreign traveling.

I surfed the Internet to find a fancy trip and I found Leaf’s post the information about looking for a guy or girl who can join their trip in Bali between Sep. 18th to 22th.

I was interesting in that, so I added her msn to my list.

After I chatted with Leaf this morning, I decided to join this traveling.

I got a lot of information about Bali from Leaf.

She wanted me to connect Candy who works in a travel agency.

I have paid the deposit for the flight.

I start to set the mood for my vacation........


 PART  II

I wanted to learn programming languages last week, but now travelling abroad almost attracts my full attention.
Surfing on the Internet, I happened to find Leaf's posting about her looking for a person  to join her trip to Beli between Sep 18th to 22th.
I was interested, so I put her name in my contact list.
After chatting with her, I decided to join the traveling.
I got a lot of information about Bali from Leaf.
She wanted me to connect Candy who works in a travel agency.
I have paid the deposit for the flight.

Candy told me there were eighteen persons had joined  this traveling include two couples, eight females, and six males.
I start to set the mood for my vacation now........

 


PART III

I wanted to learn programming languages last week, but now travelling abroad almost attracts my full attention.
Surfing on the Internet, I happened to find Leaf's posting about her looking for a person  to join her trip to Beli between Sep 18th to 22th.
I was interested, so I put her name in my contact list that I might talk about the traveling with her after she replied me on msn.
After chatting with her, I decided to join the traveling.
She told  me to connect Candy who works in a travel agency.
After one hour, I paid the deposit for the flight.
Candy told me there were eighteen persons had joined  this traveling include two couples, eight females, and six males.
I start to set the mood for my vacation now........


Thank for Willy's comment.

I will remember his last sentence forever.

Tell Me ..... 說:
rewrite it, and I might take a look tomorrow

He is a great teacher.

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