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I wanted to learn programmin languages to improve my work last week.
But now, I want to travel abroad.
I surfed the Internet to find a fancy trip and I found Leaf’s posting about looking for a guy or girl who can join their trip in Bali between Sep. 18th to 22th.
I was interested in that, so I added her msn to my list.
After I chatted with Leaf this morning, I decided to join this traveling.
I got a lot of information about Bali from Leaf.
She wanted me to connect Candy who works in a travel agency.
I have paid the deposit to take a flight.
I am preparing the emotion of the traveling.
PART I
I wanted to learn a computer programming language to improve my cable design last week.
But, now I want to have a foreign traveling.
I surfed the Internet to find a fancy trip and I found Leaf’s post the information about looking for a guy or girl who can join their trip in Bali between Sep. 18th to 22th.
I was interesting in that, so I added her msn to my list.
After I chatted with Leaf this morning, I decided to join this traveling.
I got a lot of information about Bali from Leaf.
She wanted me to connect Candy who works in a travel agency.
I have paid the deposit for the flight.
I start to set the mood for my vacation........
PART II
I wanted to learn programming languages last week, but now travelling abroad almost attracts my full attention.
Surfing on the Internet, I happened to find Leaf's posting about her looking for a person to join her trip to Beli between Sep 18th to 22th.
I was interested, so I put her name in my contact list.
After chatting with her, I decided to join the traveling.
I got a lot of information about Bali from Leaf.
She wanted me to connect Candy who works in a travel agency.
I have paid the deposit for the flight.
Candy told me there were eighteen persons had joined this traveling include two couples, eight females, and six males.
I start to set the mood for my vacation now........
PART III
I wanted to learn programming languages last week, but now travelling abroad almost attracts my full attention.
Surfing on the Internet, I happened to find Leaf's posting about her looking for a person to join her trip to Beli between Sep 18th to 22th.
I was interested, so I put her name in my contact list that I might talk about the traveling with her after she replied me on msn.
After chatting with her, I decided to join the traveling.
She told me to connect Candy who works in a travel agency.
After one hour, I paid the deposit for the flight.
Candy told me there were eighteen persons had joined this traveling include two couples, eight females, and six males.
I start to set the mood for my vacation now........
Thank for Willy's comment.
I will remember his last sentence forever.
Tell Me ..... 說:
rewrite it, and I might take a look tomorrow
He is a great teacher.
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